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brokenhighways ([personal profile] brokenhighways) wrote in [personal profile] svgurl 2021-08-21 01:53 pm (UTC)

From what I've read of your writing, you do a good job of balancing it out. I have this book called the Emotion Thesaurus which helped me a lot with figuring out how to make it so the characters aren't just standing there. Things like facial expressions, inner thoughts, maybe they're gesticulating or rubbing the back of their neck, etc. I have it on Drive somewhere as a PDF (or an epub if you'd prefer that) if you're interested.


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