Yes it's great to feel good about our improving style isn't it. I've often re-edited my old fics because some parts don't make sense.
The no. 1 thing that bugs me about fics is when writers don't start a new line for each new person who speaks or acts. Then I don't know who is saying and doing what and it gets confusing.
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Date: 2025-01-18 09:38 am (UTC)The no. 1 thing that bugs me about fics is when writers don't start a new line for each new person who speaks or acts. Then I don't know who is saying and doing what and it gets confusing.